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He said, she said

In my Writer’s Mind class last semester, my professor went over several things to avoid at all costs while writing. Do not use adverbs; always use the active voice, etc. In many circumstances I agree with these practices.

However, there was one suggestion that my professor made that I am not sure if I agree with. She asserted that when writing dialogue only to use “he said” or “she said” to denote who is speaking. She claimed that most readers just skip over that part and that using stronger verbs like “he shouted” is actually distracting.

I never heard this before, and while I sort of see where her point could make sense I’m not sure that can be said as an absolute. A character saying words and a character whispering them can paint completely different images in a reader’s head. Any opinions on this?

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I love writer’s workshops

Writing Workshop

Writing Workshop

I was first introduced to the writer’s workshop last year in my creative writing class. I cannot believe that I was not exposed to this sooner. When my professor initially described the concept to our class, I was less than thrilled. I don’t know why I had reservations about sharing my work with my fellow classmates when I am eager to eventually share my work with the entire world.

I suppose the reasons for my negative feelings had to do with previous encounters with sharing my work in class. Often, classmates do not really care about your work and do not offer constructive advice. Many people are afraid to say anything negative about other people’s work so they lie and praise errors which makes the process useless.

However, last year I was lucky to be put in a group of people who were equally serious about their writing  and the experience was eye opening. Our process was that we would bring our first draft to the group, another member would read it aloud and discuss its positive and negative points with the group while the author remained silent. Then the author had a chance to make explanations, ask questions, and leave with plenty of productive feedback to further perfect the piece.

I feel that this type of collaboration is extremely beneficial to the writing process and should be utilized whenever writer’s have the chance.

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Some interesting creative writing exercises

I found a web forum on the Ask MetaFilter website in which one of the users inquired about some valuable writing exercises. Like this person, I feel that creative writing exercises can be a great way to come up with ideas, overcome writer’s block and provide some focus to writing.

 

Here are three exercises that I would definitely like to try:

 

  • Take any piece of your writing, and pick a random spot. At that spot, have two men with guns enter the room. Start writing a new story from that spot.
  • Think of a particularly tense or heated situation that you have experienced and write it from the point of view of the opposite person.
  • Go to a supermarket, pick a person going through the express checkout, and ‘figure out’ why they’re buying what they are, why the need it, and why they’re slightly ashamed to be seen buying it.

 

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