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He said, she said

In my Writer’s Mind class last semester, my professor went over several things to avoid at all costs while writing. Do not use adverbs; always use the active voice, etc. In many circumstances I agree with these practices.

However, there was one suggestion that my professor made that I am not sure if I agree with. She asserted that when writing dialogue only to use “he said” or “she said” to denote who is speaking. She claimed that most readers just skip over that part and that using stronger verbs like “he shouted” is actually distracting.

I never heard this before, and while I sort of see where her point could make sense I’m not sure that can be said as an absolute. A character saying words and a character whispering them can paint completely different images in a reader’s head. Any opinions on this?

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Anne Lamott

“Seeing yourself in print is such an amazing concept: you can get so much attention without having to actually show up somewhere . . .You don’t have to dress up, for instance, and you can’t hear them boo you right away.” 

That is a quote from a book I just bought called “Bird by Bird: Some Instructions on Writing and Life” by Anne Lamott. I just started it last night and so far it seems really good. Here is an interview with the author. It isn’t a how-to book, although it contains a lot of helpful ideas and exercises to try, she is writing about her own experiences becoming a writer. So far it seems like it will be informative and pretty funny too!

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A blog about blogs

Here is a site that has a list of the Top 100 Creative Writing Blogs. You can find everything from author’s blogs to editing tips.

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So I graduated…now what?

I’m sure we are all a little bit worried about what happens after we graduate with our Writing Arts degrees…I know I am. Here are some websites that can help you search for an internship or a job in the writing field.

this one is great for internships but also has a job search engine

general writing jobs

search for freelance

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Basic Things to Keep in Mind While Writing

According to Edina School’s OWL (online writing lab), the following are the six main traits of writing. I thought that the questions following each trait could be useful to all writers.

1. Idea and Content – This includes the purpose for writing. Every paper should convey a message and be easy to follow. Ask these questions:

  • What is my message and is it focused and clear?
  • Did I include important details relevant to my topic?
  • Did the reader learn something new?
  • Is my paper interesting and easy to understand?

2. Organization – It is essential to keep writing organized so that readers can move through the piece in a meaningful way. Organization includes using proper headings and transitions and making sure the piece is written in a logical order. Ask these questions:

  • Does my beginning hook my reader?
  • Is my paper easy to follow? Did I choose the best way to organize my story?
  • Do my ideas link to a main message?
  • Do I have a strong conclusion that wraps up the story?

3. Voice – Voice is the personal flare put in a piece of writing by the author. It stylizes the piece and helps keep readers interested. Different genres and purposes for writing requires different voices (e.g. formal vs. informal). Ask these questions:

  • Can you tell I am enthusiastic about my topic?
  • Does this writing sound like me?
  • How do I want my readers to feel?
  • Will my story hold readers’ attention? Will they want to hear more?

4. Sentence Fluency – It is important that writer’s words flow and are easy to read allowed. Sentence structure should vary so that the piece does not sound monotone or robotic. Ask these questions:

  • Is my story easy to read?
  • Do my sentences begin in different ways?
  • Did I use some long and some short sentences?
  • Does my paper sound smooth as I read it aloud?

5. Word Choice – Use specific words to create images, capture attention of readers and make writing memorable. Ask these questions:

  • Have I used some strong verbs or colorful phrases that grab my reader?
  • Have I chosen the most precise word?
  • Have I used any unique words?
  • Did I repeat common words too many times?

6. Conventions – After writing the first draft of a paper, edit it and make sure that all of the conventions of writing are used properly. These include punctuation, spelling, capitalization, grammar and paragraphing. Ask these questions:

  • Did I leave spaces between words and sentences?
  • Did I use a title?
  • Did I use correct punctuation?
  • Did I use capital letters in the right places?
  • Have I proofread for correct spelling and grammar?

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Creative Writing Exercises for the Elementary Classroom

Frustrated Student taken from Google Images

Frustrated Student taken from Google Images

There are a myriad of students in the modern education system that dislike and try to avoid writing. According to Regina G. Richards in her article Why Students Avoid Writing, reasons for children’s disdain for writing include that it is tedious and takes too long, they struggle with the grammar and mechanics of writing, they have difficulty expressing their ideas in words, they struggle with a learning disorder, or they are simply never happy with their writing products.

Fun and interesting activities can be incorporated into the classroom to spark students’ interest in writing. The following are some examples compiled using Busy Teacher’s Cafe and Traci’s Creative Writing Activities.

Picture Prompt – Distribute pictures to the students from a coloring book with no words. Have them color the page, and write a story about them. Laminate the students’ work to create a class picture book.

Story Lists Create word lists that correspond with a topic. Allow students to pick a topic and have them use the word list to create a story.

Paragraph Order Take a paragraph, cut it into sentence strips and put the strips in an envelope. Instruct students to put the strips in an order that makes sense.

Show and Tell Instead of bringing an object to class and telling about it, students write a detailed paper describing their item and why it is significant to them.

Jumble Story Provide a list of characters, settings, and situations and have students pick one from each list and create a story using those elements.

Scavenger Hunt Host a scavenger hunt over the course of a week in which students are provided with a list of things and instead of bringing them in, they must describe how they found the items in writing.

Embellish and Ad Take an advertisement from the classified ads and ask students to write a story about the person who placed the ad, the object that they are selling, and why they are selling it.

Confess a Secret Have students invent a character who possesses a secret and roleplay as that character by writing a series of journal entries.

Memoir Have students recall a significant place or event from their childhood and describe it in writing.

Found Treasures Take a bunch of odds and ends and place them into brown paper lunch bags and distribute them to students. The students must pretend this is random treasure they found and write about the person who collected the objects, how he found them, and why they are important.

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Diversity aspect of Information Ecologies

At the bottom of page 51 of Nardi and O’day’s Information Technologies, there is a quote that I found insightful.

“In an information ecology there are different kinds of people and different kinds of tools. In a healthy information ecology, they work together in a complementary way. In a library information ecology, for example, we find that librarians fill niches such as handling rare books, telling stories to children, answering reference questions, and publishing World Wide Web materials. All of these different roles of librarians help make the library work well for its community, providing different resources for varied audiences and their needs. the set of technological resources in a library is also diverse. There are computers that provide electronic catalogs and internet access, paper and pencils for writing down call numbers, and labels on shelves so you know which section of books you’re looking at.”

I thought this paragraph demonstrated a good example of the diversity aspect of information technologies. These technologies and services are very specific to the library. It would be strange to see some of these elements in other information ecologies. Each one is unique in its own way. Can you think of an example of another place that incorporates a specific, diverse set of writing resources?

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Writing Spaces and Remediation

I frequently write in a journal with a pen and paper. This writing space is unique because many people who keep journals now use electronic writing spaces such as blogs. Writing a journal on paper allows me to say whatever I want without worrying that the internet population will be reading it. I can also draw and sketch things in my journal which is something that I could not do in the same way on a blog.
I do use electronic writing spaces as well such as Microsoft Word and Facebook. Word is unique because when you make a spelling mistake you have spell check to fix it as well as other applications that can help you to create a better piece of writing than you could with a pen and paper. Facebook is an interactive space that allows my writing to be seen instantly by other members of the site. The commenting aspect of the site is unique from other ways of communicating online such as Instant Messenger because other uses can see the comments along with the individual that you are sending them to.
Writing in Microsoft Word is remediating writing in a paper journal. It is doing so because the format is trying to mimic that of a piece of paper. When we write in word we see the page floating on the screen and we add our words to it as we would on paper. Word is imitating writing on paper but it is also trying to improve it which makes it remediation. Spell check, tab, and especially the delete button are all ways that Word has improved the writing space.

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Writing Spaces and Remediation

Three writing spaces that I frequently use are Microsoft Word, Microsoft PowerPoint, and Email. Microsoft Word is a writing space which appears on the computer screen as a blank page in which you can enter text, insert pictures, clip art, tables, and much more. Microsoft Word is generally more efficient in producing documents than handwriting them because many people can type faster than they write, and typewritten documents are much neater and more uniform, making them easier to read. Microsoft Word gives writers the ability to stylize their work using highlight tools, different fonts, colors and sizes. It also features a spell check tool which checks documents for spelling and grammar mistakes. It allows the writer to edit as they compose and easily change any aspect of the document before printing a final copy.

Microsoft PowerPoint is a program which allows people to create presentations. It provides many templates that the writer can choose to make their presentation visually appealing to the audience or they can create their own custom template. Like Microsoft Word, PowerPoint offers writers different fonts, sizes and colors to stylize their text. Writers can add pictures, clip art, tables and graphs to enhance their presentation. They can edit their presentations throughout the entire process of composing them. PowerPoint also has a spell checking tool that scans the presentation for spelling and grammar mistakes. Writers can totally personalize their presentations any way they want – it can be any length or number of slides. They can also add transition and sound effects to their presentations. PowerPoint is a great program to use for presentations because it entices the attention of the audience in a neat, easy to read format.
Email is a popular form of communication. It is a unique way to write out a message and send it to any number of people at the same time. In email, a writer can attach documents and websites and insert pictures and videos. It is a simple way of mass communication. It features spell check tools, as well as different fonts, sizes and colors for personalization.
According to Bolter and Grusin’s article “The Double Logic of Remediation,” remediation occurs in society because society wants media to multiply, but as they do, they are erasing other media. If I were to choose two of the above writing spaces and describe how one remediates the other, I would say that email remediates the word processor (Microsoft Word) to an extent because it performs mostly the same functions but is enhanced in that it allows writers to electronically submit their work or share it with others. In many cases it has the ability to eliminate the printing aspect of writing and the traveling through time and space to get the document where it needs to go. All three of the above mentioned writing spaces remediate older writing spaces. The word processor remediates handwritten documents, PowerPoint remediates forms of presentations like posters, handouts and transparencies, and email remediates writing letters.

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